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My version of Favourites by ~The-Psychic-Paligin:iconThe-Psychic-Paligin:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Philosophical > Fixed


Combine the sea and blazing fire,
Burn a K to show my flame,
Most think my nemesis is the golden sun,
Forgetting my malachite adversary.

Forever in a secondary stage,
I stand in second place in a line of twelve.
Should you ever discover my name
You will see it is one of a kind.
©2008 ~The-Psychic-Paligin
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As you may or may not be able to tell this is my own version of :iconkittykittyhunter:'s favourites which i quite liked.

This a semi-collab with :iconkittykittyhunter:

Here's a link to Kitty's version:
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~bragi666:iconbragi666: Mar 13, 2008, 1:27:04 PMComment hidden by Owner
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~ElairaHunter:iconElairaHunter: Mar 15, 2008, 2:36:49 PM
:heart: I like this a lot!! - consider taking out the 'in' from 'I stand in second place' - it would read a little better.

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Love is the absence of sanity in the presence of danger.

Immerse yourself in *RawEm0tion.
~The-Psychic-Paligin:iconThe-Psychic-Paligin: Mar 15, 2008, 2:43:11 PM
Okay i shall consider it ^^

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Itachi: What is it about my brother that makes you care about him so much? He’s a rogue ninja who abandoned you.

Naruto: Because he’s like a brother to me…And I’m a better brother then you ever were!!!

Itachi:......(faint smile appears on mouth)
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